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Chapter One: The Hum Before the Dawn

The universe did not begin in silence. It began in a hum.

Not the kind of hum born from machinery or the thrum of a starship reactor — but a note so deep and ancient that it carried the weight of a thousand forgotten eternities. It was the heartbeat of creation itself, stretching in every direction across the black expanse, folding and refracting like light through a crystal prism.

Zid lay half-awake on the ridge above the city, the hum drumming faintly in the base of his skull. It was always there now, a ghost in the background of every breath, every thought. The night air was cold against his skin, laced with the smell of distant rain and ionized stone. Beneath him, the city pulsed with its own rhythm — flickering neon veins threading between the blocks like electric capillaries, feeding life into the restless heart of the streets.

He told himself he had come here to think, to be alone. That was a lie.

The truth was simpler, more dangerous: he had come to listen.

There was something in that hum, something his body knew before his mind could shape the words. It wasn’t just sound — it was memory in its purest form, whispering of places he had never seen yet somehow recognized. Sometimes it felt like music; other times, like the gravity of a planet pulling on the tides of his soul.

And tonight, as clouds gathered like bruises across the sky, the hum was stronger.

He closed his eyes.

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The ridge fell away. The city vanished. And Zid found himself standing in a place that could not exist.

It was neither night nor day here — the sky was a shifting tapestry of backwards rainbows, their colors folding in on themselves in impossible spirals. The ground was a glassy black, as though the world had been forged from obsidian and polished until it reflected every warped hue above. And in the distance, a single figure stood at the edge of the horizon.

He was turned away, his silhouette outlined in strands of bent light.

Zid couldn’t see his face. Couldn’t make out the details of his form beyond the suggestion of a long coat flaring slightly in some unseen wind. But there was weight in the man’s posture, the kind of stillness that came from carrying something enormous — a burden, or a purpose.

And then, without turning, the figure spoke.

"Do you hear it too?"

The voice was quiet but unshakably clear, like it had been carved into the air itself. It carried a tone Zid couldn’t place — familiar, yet alien, as though it belonged to someone he had known in another life.

"The hum," the voice said again. "It’s calling us."

Before Zid could answer, the sky above fractured. The backwards rainbows collapsed inward, spiraling into a single, searing point of light. The horizon folded, and the figure was gone.

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Zid’s eyes snapped open to the cold wind on the ridge.

His chest was tight. His breath shallow.

It had been months since the first dream — if you could even call them dreams. They didn’t follow the logic of sleep, didn’t dissolve into haze with the morning. They were too sharp, too deliberate. And every time, the same figure appeared, closer than the last.

Never turning. Never showing his face. Never saying more than a few cryptic words.

The hum was the constant between them.

Zid sat up, glancing down toward the city’s western district. Somewhere beyond the haze of streetlights and smog, the old data-towers loomed against the skyline. He’d been drawn there more and more lately, tracing the hum like a bloodhound on an invisible trail. But each time, something stopped him — an unease that curled around his spine like a shadow. It wasn’t just curiosity anymore. It felt like inevitability.

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The storm broke suddenly, sheets of rain blurring the lights below. Zid didn’t move at first. The cold soaked through his jacket, trickling along his collarbone, but the hum had shifted again — it was louder now, resonating through the ground as if the earth itself were trying to speak.

And buried inside it was… something else.

A sound he couldn’t name. A pattern he couldn’t decipher.

It wasn’t random. It was deliberate.

Like a message.

Or a warning.

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That night, Zid dreamed again.

But this time, the figure was closer. Close enough for Zid to see that his coat wasn’t a coat at all, but armor — smooth and dark, inlaid with faint lines of silver that pulsed in time with the hum. The man’s hand rested on the hilt of something slung across his back, its shape obscured by the warped light, but the weight of it felt… important.

"We don’t have much time," the voice said, and Zid’s pulse kicked hard.

"Time for what?" he asked.

The figure didn’t answer. Instead, he turned his head slightly — not enough to reveal his face, but enough for Zid to catch the gleam of eyes that burned like starlight behind the rainbows.

And then, just as the hum swelled into something almost unbearable, the dream shattered.

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When Zid woke, his hands were clenched so tightly his knuckles ached. The rain still whispered against the window, but the hum was gone. For now.

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For now.

The wind shifted, curling around Zid as though it had caught a secret on its breath and wanted to pass it along. Sand hissed against stone. Far beyond the dune’s edge, the desert sang — not with any sound that ears could hold, but with a low, resonant hum that seemed to vibrate the space between his bones.

He had heard this hum before. In dreams.

It was always the same: an unbroken tone, steady yet alive, as if it were both calling and waiting. Sometimes, in that place between sleep and waking, the hum carried an image — fleeting, blurred by distance. Tonight, it was the silhouette of a figure standing ankle-deep in starlight. The features never stayed long enough for Zid to name them, but there was always the feeling of familiarity, like he had known this stranger across lifetimes.

This time, though, the dream had left something new behind: a hand, outstretched, palm open, waiting. He could almost feel the warmth lingering against his own, though they had never touched.

The image dissolved with the rising sun, but the hum did not.

Zid adjusted the strap of his pack and started toward the ridge. The sands of time were said to shift more quickly here — a place where moments behaved strangely, where the past sometimes surged ahead of the present, and futures collapsed into the present without warning. Few came willingly. Fewer returned unchanged.

At the ridge’s crest, the horizon unfolded in an expanse of gold and fire. Pillars jutted from the sand in uneven intervals, each one carved from a black stone that drank the sunlight whole. Between them shimmered thin veils of bent light, like heat mirages — except these shapes moved with intent. Zid’s eyes narrowed. They almost seemed to fold inward on themselves, like rainbows turned inside out.

The stories called them memory gates — echoes of the old ShineChain, remnants of the ZiZidion’s original field. He descended carefully, each step sinking deeper into the shifting surface. Somewhere in the distance, a slow, deliberate movement disturbed the dunes — not a creature, but the sand itself, flowing in spirals as though stirred by an invisible hand. Zid felt it then: the familiar pull in his chest, the same sensation from his dreams, drawing him closer.

He pressed forward. The air thickened, every breath laced with the taste of copper and lightning. When he passed between the first pair of black pillars, the world blinked.

One step, and he was somewhere else.

The desert was gone. Now he stood in a vast chamber of glass and shadow, where threads of light twisted into constellations midair. The floor mirrored the sky above so perfectly that walking felt like moving between twin heavens.

And there — far ahead — the silhouette from his dreams. Still faceless, still watching. This time the hum was stronger, as if the walls themselves were vibrating with it. Zid tried to move forward, but the space between them seemed to stretch endlessly, a corridor of starlight that refused to close.

He took another step. The figure raised its hand — the same outstretched gesture, palm open, waiting. Zid reached back, not knowing why, only that the motion felt inevitable.

The moment his fingers brushed the air where their hands might meet, the world shattered.

Sand. Heat. The smell of dust. He was back in the desert, the black pillars behind him, the ridge above. The hum was gone.

But the warmth in his palm remained.

He flexed his fingers, feeling the ghost of that touch linger longer than it should have. Whatever that dream-shadow was — whoever — it was no longer just a dream.

And somewhere, far beyond the horizon, the same hum echoed in another mind.

Understood. Picking up exactly where we left off and carrying the chapter all the way past your requested minimum. No more breaks—just the story, straight through to the end of Chapter One.

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The sun climbed, and the sand became a mirror for heat. By midday, the edges of Zid’s vision shook—little heat snakes dancing in the distance—while the world itself seemed to breathe: in with a hush, out with a faint rattle underfoot. He kept moving. When the hum withdrew, his thoughts became loud, crowded with half-remembered warnings, map-scraps, old tavern talk about “time-pools” and “echo glass,” about people who stepped between pillars like he had and came back with hair turned white, or with an extra second in their stride that never synced with anyone else again.

He stopped at a wind-scoured outcrop and dropped his pack. Inside was a small kit: a coil of wire, an old analog compass he didn’t trust but refused to throw away, a field journal with pages stiff from salt and sand, and a smooth black coin that never warmed in his palm. He rolled that coin across his knuckles now, back and forth, waiting to see if it would tug, or sing, or do anything except be unreasonably heavy for its size.

The coin remained a coin. The hum remained silence.

“Fine,” he muttered, and took a swallow from his canteen. The water had a metallic edge, like it had remembered a pipe from long ago and hadn’t forgiven the separation.

He was repacking when he noticed the tracks.

They were faint, barely indents at first, then clearer, as though something light had skated over the dune and barely careened. They didn’t match any animal he knew—no talon points, no hoof splits, no heel-toe. They were ovals, each ringed by a delicate ripple where sand had pushed back. And they overlapped in a peculiar pattern, each new step resolving into the old, as if whoever made them kept stepping into their own wake.

Zid stood and turned a slow circle. The ridge was quiet. The pillars were quiet. He felt the way you feel when you misplace a word, not the object—an absence that stings because it should be obvious.

He followed the ovals.

The tracks zigzagged between two lower pillars and then curved into a shallow basin the wind hadn’t found yet. There, in the stillness, someone had drawn with a finger: a circle, neatly pressed into the sand; inside it, a spiral; and at the spiral’s center, three short lines radiating outward like a tiny crown. Zid crouched, heartbeat picking up. The drawing wasn’t old. The ridges of sand were crisp, untouched by breeze or beetle. He stuck out a hand. The grain under his fingertip was cool, as if the mark itself had shaded it.

“Hello?” he called, because even foolishness needed a voice to prove it was brave.

No answer—unless you counted the soft tick that came from nowhere and everywhere at once, the sound of a watch-hand skipping back one beat, then back again, then forward three, like time had stuttered its way through indecision.

The tick passed; a wind picked up; the spiral blurred; the tiny crown dissolved. He exhaled. “All right.”

The ridge gave him a view of the city again. From here, the towers were bone-white instead of shadow teeth. Stormbursts still wandered in the distance, sheeted veils of rain falling through light. Zid imagined the towers humming the way radios hum when you tune between stations, imagining the noise as voices you can almost make sense of if you tilt your head, if you close one eye, if you hold your breath long enough that your heartbeat is the only metronome left.

He slid down the slope and turned his steps toward the western district.

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The city welcomed him the way cities welcome anyone: with indifference, with the shuffle and shove and chorus of ten thousand lives arranged into the same narrow lanes. There were market stalls beneath battered canvas where the sellers didn’t need to shout because the goods shouted for them—limes glowing with trapped sun, wire-wound bracelets that glittered like stored lightning, jars of pale sand labeled with names like “Lullaby” and “Archive” and “Last Rain Before the Drought.” He passed a stand where a girl ground ink by hand. Her mortar was obsidian; her pestle, bone. She worked in circles, then spirals, then let the ink drip onto paper made from mulched palm leaves. When the drops spread, they formed tiny constellations.

“Looking for something?” she asked without looking up.

“Always,” he said.

She smiled like a private joke had just been shared. “It’s cheaper to know what it is.”

“I’ll pay the difference,” he said, and they both left it there.

The western district stank less than it used to and more than it should. That was how you knew the towers were alive again. Even repaired systems smell like their damage for a while—ozone where there was fire, vinegar where there was rot, copper where blood had been.

He ducked between two piles of shattered masonry and followed an alley that ended in a fence patched with corrugated metal and prayer ribbons. The tower compound lay beyond: five pillars of glass and steel gathered around a central spire that never reflected anything you could recognize. In its surface, people became smears of light; the sky became an eye without a pupil.

The hum returned when he touched the gate.

Not loud. Not dramatic. Just there, like a pressure change. The black coin in his pocket warmed for the first time since he’d stolen it (some would say inherited; others would say rescued; Zid refused to categorize it) from a lockbox stamped with a sigil no one in the district had admitted to recognizing.

He slipped inside.

No guards. No obvious eyes. That was part of the trap here. The towers didn’t care if you came or went. Their interest only awakened after. After you breathed the air too long, after you asked the wrong question out loud, after you stood on the tile circle in the foyer and felt the patterns press up into your soles like Braille written by an insect god.

Zid stood on the circle.

The foyer was a cathedral to function—clean lines, white stone with faint veins that might have been fossils or might have been wiring laid beneath a geologic pretense, three banks of lifts that pretended to be dormant until you caught them moving in the corner of your eye. A woman’s laugh echoed from somewhere above, then cut off so fast it might have been spliced out of the air.

The coin in his pocket pulsed.

“All right,” he said to it, because making agreements with objects is a way of telling yourself you aren’t governed by them. “You get to choose this time.”

He took the center lift.

Inside, the light was too even. He could see his face in the polished steel, and in the face he saw the color of his eyes shift half a tone toward lighter, then (when he blinked) return. He pressed nothing. The doors closed. The lift did not move; it moved. He felt the sensation in his organs but not in his knees. The numbers above the door did not change; then they all changed at once, becoming symbols, becoming a single ringed circle, becoming a spiral pierced by three short lines.

“Crown,” he whispered, remembering the sand drawing. “Spiral. Center.”

The doors opened.

The floor beyond was glass. Beneath it, white. Above it, white. For a second he thought the lift had opened on a void; then his eyes adjusted and resolved planes: surfaces without corners, angles that didn’t meet until you turned your head. In the middle of the space, a black table waited, its top inlaid with a threadwork of metal so delicate you might mistake it (if you were foolish) for ornament.

Zid stepped out, and the coin in his pocket rattled, as if greeting an old friend it hated. “Visitor,” said a voice that wasn’t a voice, the statement forming in the air the way frost forms on glass. “We’ve been expecting your kind for some time.”

He looked up. He looked around. He saw nothing but white and the black table.

“You’re not the first to wear that coin,” the not-voice continued. “Most return it. Others pretend they never had it. A very few pretend it belongs to them.”

“Who are you?”

A pause that had the texture of amusement. “Archivist. Gate. Echo. Choose whichever noun makes it easier for you to listen.”

He approached the table. Up close, the filigree grew readable: an atlas of loops and lines, a circuit diagram drawn by a cartographer who loved rivers enough to make them sing. He laid his palm (the one that still held heat from a hand that had never touched it) on the center of the design.

The table woke.

Not bright—more like a sheet of early dawn rolling toward him, the exact color of the moment after night surrenders but before day makes a declaration. Threads of light lifted off the metal and formed a sphere above his hand. In the sphere, a desert curled, then a city, then a child dragging a stick through wet sand, drawing spirals inside circles inside spirals again. The child’s face never resolved. Zid felt the ache of that ambiguity like hunger.

“The sand takes impressions,” the Archivist said. “Some keep their shape. Some do not.”

“The crown in the spiral,” Zid said. “What does it mean?”

“Three points of contact. Three opportunities to exit. Three promises left unmade.”

“I don’t speak in riddles,” he said.

“You do, actually,” said a new voice, this one very much a voice—dry, amused, burnished with years. It came from behind him. “Just not on purpose.”

He turned.

An old woman stood in the lift mouth, one hand braced on a cane that had clearly been a spear once. Her hair—what he could see of it under the scarf—was a color he’d only ever seen on the inside of a shell. Her eyes were gray and not unkind. Her clothes were practical: layered, mended, clean, the way people dress when they know they might need to climb a wall without ripping a seam. “I’ve been expecting you,” she said, and he suppressed the reflexive wince. Everyone had a script when they dealt with the towers; “expecting you” was line one.

“Congratulations,” he said. “Do I owe you money?”

“You owe me patience,” she said, chuckling. “But I’m willing to extend your credit.”

He glanced at the sphere above the table. The desert image had stilled. Now it was only the spiral again, neat and maddening. He withdrew his palm. The light folded like cloth and sank.

“Who are you?” he asked her.

“People call me Ash,” she said. “Because people cannot resist a metaphor. I worked the western array when it kept itself alive. Now I keep it from killing children.”

“I’m not a child.”

“You’re not as old as the tower,” she said. “That’s enough.”

He liked her against his will. “All right, Ash. What is this place?”

“Once? A mirror,” she said, tapping her cane against the glass. “For the field that used to enclose this city. For the ZiZidion’s sleeve, if you like the old words. Later, a museum. Then a mausoleum. Now? A mouth that chews on its name and spits out whatever walks too close.”

“And the coin?” he asked, touching his pocket.

“A key made from a broken tooth,” she said. “And an invitation for other things to try the lock when you hold it wrong.”

He fought the urge to look over his shoulder. “Other things like…?”

“Questions with legs,” Ash said. “Don’t worry. They usually bite the ankles of people who run.”

“I’m not running,” he said.

“I know,” she said softly. “That’s why I came down.”

They faced each other across the table. Zid realized that while they’d talked, his heartbeat had synced to something—no, to a few things at once: his own pulse, the faint vibration of the filigree under glass, and the even slowness of hers. The hum had returned, and it included her now, as if two instruments had found a shared tonic. “Tell me what you want,” Ash said. “Not in the big sense. Not ‘why do you live’ or ‘what is truth’ or ‘how do I repair the sky’—we’ve all had our turn at those. Tell me what you want today.”

He considered. The simple answer was knowledge. The braver answer was belonging. The most honest answer was relief—from the hum, from the dreams, from the certainty that something was waiting for him to play a note only he could hear.

“An origin,” he said, surprising himself. “A start point. Even if it’s arbitrary.”

“Good,” she said. “Beginnings are inventions; that’s their power.”

Ash turned her hand. In her palm lay a shard of something that looked like glass until the light struck it, and then it looked like water until his breath touched it, and then it looked like nothing at all until he blinked it back. She laid it on the table. It sank without sinking, entering the filigree and lodging there, a small absence that made the larger pattern read differently.

The room changed.

He didn’t move, but distance moved around him. The white planes tilted and became dunes again—these dunes not of sand but of paper and cloth and wires looped like intestines. He stood in a long corridor hung with prayer flags that had once been data banners, their code faded into patterns. The hum congealed into a chord. And at the far end, framed by an archway gnawed by time, the silhouette from his dreams waited.

Zid’s hand went to his palm. Heat kissed it. Ash’s voice came to him as if she were very near and very far at once: “Do not try to see his face when the field resists it. Your eyes will resent you later.”

“I’m not trying,” he said, and he wasn’t. The wanting was beyond his eyes. It lived under the rib he always bumped on doorframes, right there in the place you push when you convince yourself you can restart your heart with stubbornness.

He walked.

With each step, the corridor learned him, adjusting subtle grades, smoothing hazards before he could notice them. It was hospitality, and it made him uneasy. He preferred thresholds that asked for something sharp in return.

The figure raised his hand, the same as in the desert, the same openness, palm-out, waiting. Zid lifted his own.

A tremor ran through the space. The flags fluttered backward. The hum sharpened into a near-painful pitch, like the note a glass gives when you rub its rim too hard. Just before their palms could meet, the field folded, and the silhouette flickered, like a light struggling against a blown fuse.

“Not yet,” Ash said into his ear. Except she wasn’t there. Except he knew she was right. Except every useless part of him wanted to step faster because this time the figure’s head had tilted enough that Zid saw—no, sensed—the outline of cheek and jaw, and the unresolved idea of a scar where a teenage fall might have made a map.

His palm met the air where the hand should have been.

Nothing.

Then something smaller, stranger: the presence of a child’s breath on his knuckles, the barest weight of a shoulder leaning into his, the memory of a laugh he had never heard in this life. It was absurd and absolute and so gentle it nearly undid him.

The world folded again.

White. The table. Ash, her palm still against the glass, her mouth a thin line. Zid swallowed, jaw stiff. He pressed his hand to the table’s edge to ground himself. The warmth faded from his palm, but not from his chest.

“What did you see?” Ash asked.

“Not see,” he said hoarsely. “Feel.”

“Better,” she said. “Feeling survives mistranslation.”

“Who is he?” Zid asked, because not asking was a harder discipline than he had today.

“Someone whose name will matter more later than now,” Ash said. “If you name him now, you will try to steer toward or away from the name. And the field hates being managed by people who pretend they aren’t managers.”

He wanted to say, I’m not pretending—then he heard the lie before he spoke it. He let the urge pass. He reached into his pocket and set the coin on the glass.

Ash’s eyebrows went up. “You’re done hoarding it?”

“I’m done letting it pull without context.” He pushed the coin toward her. “You said key. You said tooth.”

She didn’t touch it. “It’s not mine to keep.” “It wasn’t mine to start.”

“Ownership and origin are cousins who gossip about each other,” Ash said. “If you leave it, the table will adopt it. Adoption is a form of love. And also a method of digestion.”

“I’m not feeding myself to a table.”

“Not today,” she agreed. “Put it in the slot on the north edge. That lets the system know you value language. People who pick east tell the system they value power. South, memory. West, endings.”

He turned the coin. Its edge bore a hairline slit he had never noticed. North. He slid it into a narrow seam that wasn’t there until he pressed, and then it was. The coin vanished with the quiet satisfaction of an object arriving where it had always belonged.

The lights dimmed. The filigree exhaled. The hum shifted down a tone, as though the room had lowered its shoulders.

“What did I just do?” Zid asked.

“You told the field you prefer questions that move,” Ash said. “You told it you won’t insist on a single noun. That will help you later when you want to keep a person alive who exists in more than one tense.”

The back of his neck heated. “That’s… specific.”

“It’s also true,” she said, amused again. “You carry now what we used to call a northpath. It will open things that choose to open. It will make enemies of doors that hate admitting they’re doors.”

He nodded. “What does it cost?”

“Weight,” Ash said at once. “You will weigh more to the moments that matter. The ground will remember you longer. Your footprints will last an hour after rain. Children will stare. Animals will either follow or flee; there is no middle. When you lie, your teeth will ache. When you tell the truth, you will hate the consequences, but you will prefer them.”

He should laugh. He did not. “Is that all?”

“For now,” she said, tilting her head. “You don’t need the rest of the bill before you eat.”

He let the joke cut the tension. He stepped back from the table. The white planes softened. The lift’s doors reappeared. Ash tapped her cane. “Don’t come back here tomorrow. The field tires of repeated questions. It will punish you by answering.”

“What do I do instead?”

“Walk the city like it is new,” she said. “Visit the market at dusk. Listen to the sellers when they stop selling. Go to the canal where the old stones show when the water goes down. Put your hand on the third stone from the brass ladder. When it warms, you’ll know the hum has decided to visit you where you live.”

“Will I see him again?” He didn’t know why the question leapt out. He didn’t know why he did not try to swallow it.

Ash blew air through her nose“Yes. In a form you will refuse to recognize at first because recognizing would demand you believe several impossible kind things about yourself.”

That was intolerably intimate. He gave her a narrow look. She grinned like a cat in shade.

“Go on,” she said. “Let the lift reacquaint you with gravity.”

He obeyed.

The descent—or ascent—felt like neither. When the doors parted, the foyer was a foyer again. The tile circle was only tile. The air smelled briefly of rain, though no rain stood in the door, and the street outside was bright enough to make him squint.

He left the compound by a different gap in the fence than he had entered. He did not choose it; it presented. The city refused to be ordinary for the rest of the afternoon. Every corner he turned offered a small oddity: a cat sleeping on a stack of newspapers in such a way that the headlines formed a sentence he needed to hear; a boy hopping across a chalk grid and landing only on prime numbers; a woman selling figs that contained, when he bit one, a seed that clicked softly like a lock turned from the other side.

He bought a jar of the sand labeled “Last Rain Before the Drought.” The seller lidded it carefully and told him, “Don’t open it unless you are ready to remember who you were the night before you first learned you could be cruel.”

He carried it anyway.

Dusk fell like a slow agreement. The market’s volume dropped a notch, then another. Sellers shifted from hawking to gossip. He stood at the canal’s edge and watched the water slip past. Night gathered in the reeds. Laughter drifted from a barge where musicians tuned nothing and made music about it. He waited until the water level pulled back from the lip of old stone. One ladder, tarnished brass down to one rung, then two, then six. He counted slabs from there. One. Two. The third stone was darker than its neighbors and wore a smoothness made by generations of hands and feet. He put his palm on it.

The warmth that rushed into him wasn’t heat; it was recognition.

The hum rose—not loud, but clear, like a bell rung underwater. He closed his eyes and let the note slide through him. It found

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